Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
mud stained feet
crossed, tangled and
cherry tip fingers
brushed away.
(c) me

I would love to hear your thoughts on it - what it evoked for you, in anything!
:iconamericanlass:
AmericanLass Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
Well, for starters I really like it and I would love to see a little bit more just to kind of see where it will go!

In my opinion, I feel like it's someone's happy memories being brushed aside by the fact that they are indeed just memories. Like maybe two friends that had a fight, or a couple that broke up, maybe even someone that died?
Or maybe it's something more along the lines of like a plant or something? Like flowers that are being moved aside maybe?

Ugh, I hate trying to interpret poetry :blush:
However, I do really like it. I feel like it really could evoke just about anything. Like I said before though, I would like to see just a teensy tiny bit more :)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconwriteacrossme: More from writeacrossme


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
October 11, 2014
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
1,221
Favourites
1 (who?)
Comments
1

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
×